| This is a new student from Mainland China who has joined our online English classes. Her instructor assigned the topic, “tell us about your daily life.” Note her first draft of the essay, then the copy after her DreyerCoaching.com teacher discussed and edited it with her. This young student lives in a Chinese-speaking environment, so I think her first draft is quite good to start! However, she shows very common problems that Asian students experience when they learn English, and her teacher helps her with these:
– spelling FIRST COPY My daily life In my daily life, I always get up at 9 a.m, and then, I will brushing my teeth and washing my face. After that, I will eatting breakfast. My breakfast usually eat bread, milk or noodles, but sometime, I’m not feel like eatting breakfast. After breakfast, I’ll do some homework. Wnen I finished my homework, that is time for having lunch. Sometimes, I’ll take a break at noon. In the evening, after dinner, I will do some leisure things. I always watching TV witn my parent, but sometimes I’ll playing computer and my phone. Finally, I will go to bed. So that is my daily life. COPY AFTER EDITING with a DreyerCoaching.com Teacher My Daily Life In my daily life, I always get up at 9 a.m., and then I brush my teeth and wash my face. After that, I eat breakfast. For breakfast, I usually eat bread, milk, or noodles, but sometimes I don’t feel like eating breakfast. After breakfast, I do some homework. When I finish my homework, then it is time to have lunch. Sometimes, I take a break at noon. In the afternoon, I go to the garden to do some exercise, such as running, swimming, or playing basketball. I think doing some exercises is good for our health, so I exercise almost every day. In the evening after dinner, I do some leisure activities. I always watch TV with my parents, but sometimes I watch videos on my computer and my phone. Finally, I go to bed. So that is my daily life. ********************* Do you want help with your English writing? We can help all English levels, children to adult. Contact us today to find out how we can help you! Since 2010, based in the friendly USA State of Virginia, DreyerCoaching.com has been providing customized, high-quality, real-time language instruction via the internet to a global audience in their home, school, or office. Think how comfortable, confident and successful you or your child will feel, receiving personalized guidance from college-educated teachers who are native speakers and have bachelor’s, master’s, and doctoral degrees plus decades of teaching experience. Whether you are looking for help with the ABCs or the SATs, or college admissions to conversational English to business writing, we serve all ages and levels to help our students make dreams come true. Discover the Dreyer Difference. Take the first step and visit DreyerCoaching.com, send Scott an email, or schedule a free consultation to get started. 自 2010 年以来，DreyerCoaching.com 总部位于友好的美国弗吉尼亚州，一直通过互联网向全球观众在家中、学校或办公室提供有制度的、高质量的实时语言教学。 想想您或您的孩子会感到多么自在、自信和成功，从受过大学教育的教师那里获得个别的指导，这些教师都是以英语为母语，拥有学士、硕士和博士学位，以及数十年的教学经验的教师。 无论是从 英语ABC的基础课程 或 SAT 的帮助，就读美国高中，大学入学申请，还是从会话英语到商务写作，我们都为所有年龄和水平的学生提供服务，帮助我们的学生实现梦想。 发觉 Dreyer 的不同之处。 迈出第一步，游览 DreyerCoaching.com网站，向 Scott 发送电子邮件，可开始安排一个免费咨询。 |
Before & After Student Writing: “My Daily Routine”
