{"id":245630,"date":"2016-10-10T21:51:00","date_gmt":"2016-10-10T21:51:00","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/dreyercoaching.com\/beardeddragonmedia\/writing\/hometown-student-writing\/"},"modified":"2021-09-26T03:42:55","modified_gmt":"2021-09-26T03:42:55","slug":"hometown-student-writing","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/dreyercoaching.com\/beardeddragonmedia\/writing\/hometown-student-writing\/","title":{"rendered":"My Hometown &#8212; Student Writing"},"content":{"rendered":"<p><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\" size-full wp-image-245629\" src=\"https:\/\/dreyercoaching.com\/beardeddragonmedia\/wp-content\/uploads\/2016\/10\/37a06e4a72d6cb27621f1ed829bbee81.jpg\" alt=\"\" width=\"379\" height=\"295\" srcset=\"https:\/\/dreyercoaching.com\/beardeddragonmedia\/wp-content\/uploads\/2016\/10\/37a06e4a72d6cb27621f1ed829bbee81.jpg 379w, https:\/\/dreyercoaching.com\/beardeddragonmedia\/wp-content\/uploads\/2016\/10\/37a06e4a72d6cb27621f1ed829bbee81-300x234.jpg 300w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 379px) 100vw, 379px\" \/><\/p>\n<table style=\"width: 1188px; height: 270px;\">\n<tbody>\n<tr>\n<td style=\"width: 519px;\">\n<p>A high school student from Hohhot, Inner Mongolia, China, recently took an <a href=\"https:\/\/dreyercoaching.com\/beardeddragonmedia\/english\/general-english-one-on-one\/\">online 1 on 1 English class<\/a> with me. We focused on his writing skills. He wrote to introduce his hometown to me; he read it out loud in class; then I made some suggestions to improve the English, which he edited on his computer screen for me to see in real time. Below you can see the BEFORE and AFTER papers.<\/p>\n<p>&nbsp;<br \/> 1. When I live in <strong><span>the Hohhot<\/span><\/strong> which is a city surrounding the <strong><span>mounts<\/span><\/strong>, I always climb the mounts with my parents on the <strong>weekend<\/strong>. Walking on mounts, it make me <strong>feel comfortable<\/strong>, because the air is very fresh and <strong>not much noise<\/strong>. <strong>Except that,<\/strong> when I see the mounts, I can relax. <strong>Afternoon<\/strong> we can find a river and sit near it to barbecue. It is a <strong>real to relax<\/strong>. Although it is <strong>a tried day<\/strong>, it can lessen my stress.<\/p>\n<p>2. When I live in Hohhot, a city surrounded by mountains, I always climb the mountains with my parents on the weekends. Hiking makes me feel wonderful, because the air is incredibly fresh and I enjoy the quiet. In addition, when I see the mountains, I can relax. In the afternoon we can find a river and sit near it to barbecue. My family grills sausages, beef, and we always have mutton. We have iced tea out of a can to go with our meal. I do not like the smoke from the grill but I love the eating. It is a great opportunity to relax. Although it is a tiring day, it can lessen my stress.<\/p>\n<p>**********************<\/p>\n<p>See the difference? 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